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This involves the following steps: @enumerate @item -Channels live in a Git repository so the first step, when creating a +A channel lives in a Git repository so the first step, when creating a channel, is to create its repository: @example @@ -5790,7 +5790,7 @@ The next step is to create files containing package modules (@pxref{Package Modules}), each of which will contain one or more package definitions (@pxref{Defining Packages}). A channel can provide things other than packages, such as build systems or services; we're -using packages as most common use case. +using packages as it's the most common use case. For example, Alice might want to provide a module called @code{(alice packages greetings)} that will provide her favorite ``hello world'' @@ -5815,7 +5815,7 @@ that. @item With this first module in place, the next step is to test the packages it provides. This can be done with @command{guix build}, which needs to -be fold to look for modules in the Git checkout. For example, assuming +be told to look for modules in the Git checkout. For example, assuming @code{(alice packages greetings)} provides a package called @code{hi-from-alice}, Alice will run this command from the Git checkout: @@ -5856,7 +5856,7 @@ example, @code{(alice packages greetings)} will automatically be found by the @command{guix} command. @end enumerate -Voilà! +Voilà! @c What follows stems from discussions at @c as well as