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[bug#71236] doc: Minor changes to the OCI-backed Services documentation.

Message ID 8963fc4674560ce88817255a7ef0feefafba2cb1.1716848510.git.goodoldpaul@autistici.org
State New
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Series [bug#71236] doc: Minor changes to the OCI-backed Services documentation. | expand

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Giacomo Leidi May 27, 2024, 10:21 p.m. UTC
* doc/guix.texi: Clarify the example and remove reduntant escapes.

Change-Id: I38f5517ae46b391ba21ae5a94c6dcc272e245036
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 doc/guix.texi | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)


base-commit: 00384aedbc6a371aaf90ca344a446952fdd5a6b3

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Giacomo Leidi May 29, 2024, 8:21 p.m. UTC | #1
Closing this as I'll reopen another issue
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diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index c1ff049f03..28e3551ee0 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -40572,7 +40572,7 @@  Miscellaneous Services
              '("/var/lib/grafana:/var/lib/grafana")))))
 @end lisp
 
-In this example two different Shepherd services are going be added to the
+In this example three different Shepherd services are going be added to the
 system.  Each @code{oci-container-configuration} record translates to a
 @code{docker run} invocation and its fields directly map to options.  You can
 refer to the
@@ -40580,8 +40580,8 @@  Miscellaneous Services
 documentation for the semantics of each value.  If the images are not found they
 will be
 @url{https://docs.docker.com/engine/reference/commandline/pull/,pulled}.  The
-spawned services are going to be attached to the host network and are supposed
-to behave like other processes.
+services with @code{(network "host")} are going to be attached to the host network
+and are supposed to behave like native processes with regard to networking.
 
 @end defvar
 
@@ -40613,8 +40613,8 @@  Miscellaneous Services
 value can be a list of pairs or strings, even mixed:
 
 @lisp
-(list '(\"LANGUAGE\" . \"eo:ca:eu\")
-      \"JAVA_HOME=/opt/java\")
+(list '("LANGUAGE\" . "eo:ca:eu")
+      "JAVA_HOME=/opt/java")
 @end lisp
 
 Pair members can be strings, gexps or file-like objects. Strings are passed